I don't really want this to be about Doctor/Rose, or really the Doctor at all.
Oops, yes, sorry. After your comment about the Ten and Jack angst I lost sight of this.
I'm already struggling with a tragic epilogue that puts him front and center.
Honestly, even though I love the idea, I'm not sure it keeps the thematic focus on Rose like you want, (unless I am misunderstanding again?)
It's just... right now, unless I can rework it, it's not the direction I want to go with the story.
Hey, no worries :) It's your story, and given the reason's you've outlined here, it makes perfect sense NOT to go that way. And this is your story (and your journal too), you have every right to ignore my unsolicited ideas, or tell me to shut up and go away. l Either way, I'll still be lining up to read the story :)
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Date: 2007-08-19 12:36 am (UTC)I don't really want this to be about Doctor/Rose, or really the Doctor at all.
Oops, yes, sorry. After your comment about the Ten and Jack angst I lost sight of this.
I'm already struggling with a tragic epilogue that puts him front and center.
Honestly, even though I love the idea, I'm not sure it keeps the thematic focus on Rose like you want, (unless I am misunderstanding again?)
It's just... right now, unless I can rework it, it's not the direction I want to go with the story.
Hey, no worries :) It's your story, and given the reason's you've outlined here, it makes perfect sense NOT to go that way. And this is your story (and your journal too), you have every right to ignore my unsolicited ideas, or tell me to shut up and go away.
l
Either way, I'll still be lining up to read the story :)